Hello to everyone ! 

I just finished my first experimental short and I would wish to ask you to critique it, leave your feedback and come up with your interpretions !!! :D All people around me only say "I like it etc" I know they aren't honnest and need it to become better ! I want to improved in filmmaking, and with out critique it's immpossiible :) So please go ahead and enjoy it :D 

"Out of the frame" (fr "Hors du cadre") - link to the movie: https://www.festivalnikon.fr/video/2025/2676